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Trials of Seductive Resonance. by ~desol8:icondesol8:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Fixed


Trials of Seductive Resonance (significance)

Pick me up again,
off this dream-stained pathway.
The boundries have been blurred again.
Dimorphic love

Half and half, three quarters and one.
Divulge the divided world,
of preconscious seperation.
Choices exist to be made

Let me fall again.
Sink into obscurity.
The shadows grow,
as the sunset falls.

Half and half, one and a quarter
hold on to dwindling resolve.
By now it all seems desolate.
The fine line traversed.

Pick me up again...
©2004-2009 ~desol8
:icondesol8:

Author's Comments

Hmmm ive been inspired to write poetry recently :)

as usual i dont like telling you what it really about, in my opinion i think poetry is as much about your interpretation as my writing :)

enjoy and comment
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~reveil-du-cauchemar Nov 6, 2004, 9:22:43 PM
Cool man. I'm not so good at critiquing poetry or writing, so I won't say much on this :P - but I think perhaps that you could use 'one' instead of '1' and 'three' instead of '3' - it kind of breaks it up a bit I think...

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Anthony


Know thyself.
:icondesol8:
~desol8 Nov 6, 2004, 9:27:08 PM
ahh you think?

ill go change it and see how it looks :)

thank you father abraham. have you bought fable yet :P?

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~forty2 Nov 7, 2004, 12:42:48 AM
I like it! I won't tell you what I think its about either.
And Anthony's right, one works better instead of 1.

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Art is the highest task and proper metaphysical activity of this life.- Nietzsche.
:iconsilentskream:
~silentskream Nov 7, 2004, 3:12:59 AM
was great,but no clear meaning comes out of it,
"Half and half, three quarters and one."
"Half and half, one and a quarter",probably this poem is about an alcoholic's departure from reality into his own world or something..
"Dimorphic love"....no idea,probably his attachment to booze...

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~desol8 Nov 7, 2004, 4:32:45 AM
It's actually about a person that loves someone that they know is bad for them, and the resulting conflict of emotion :)

half and half-etc etc is referring to the weight of each side, "do i love her, or do I leave her"

dimorphic the word is dictionary defined as "Existing or occurring in two distinct forms"

like i say, i speak in riddles which only i can understand :)

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~desol8 Nov 7, 2004, 4:34:36 AM
Ive been forced to explain my thoughts behind it so you can check if you were right or not :)

yeah tony was right, i changed it :p

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~silentskream Nov 7, 2004, 4:37:56 AM
ohh I see.sorry for the pathetic interpretation of a wonderful peice.

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:icondesol8:
~desol8 Nov 7, 2004, 4:58:42 AM
haha its completely cool, i dont expect people to get them right away, i guess i write poetry more for myself than anyone else, as a reminder of feelings/events etc :)

i hope the description makes it somewhat better :P

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~KagomeResurrected Nov 7, 2004, 7:15:47 AM
Good poetry *snaps* and once again, trippy title...
i like how "let me fall again" is followed by "pick me up again"
beautiful..ah fickle human heart,..:clap:

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~daeken Nov 7, 2004, 7:32:32 AM
Wow! Really, really fuggin' good man. Reminds me a lot of Akerfeldt's style of writing... I could see this put to Opeth-esque music in all honesty :)

Very nice work.

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